GREAT JOB! =D

UPDATE!

UPDATE, I love this story! It's written very well, ignore Flame Rising!

UPDATE! This story is AMAZING! Please update! I love stories where the Marauders come to Harry's time!

it develops along the chapter!
really really good..

and the characters are getting
more onto their scemes.

Im just a lil nostalgic couse
I liked snape /ç-ç\

bye

I´m loving this fic so far!!
I adored the last harry´s book T.T
and this fic looks so much like
a kind os sequel XP

taking of a few things, like the
details of the scene and the time-character
its almost perfect

just one critcims, and I think its
for a consructive cause. If not, I wouldn´t even
bother, but I liked you n.n; (read your profile)
and will tell. It´s confusing some times, you made
this text having in mind maybe, that everyone had
read the last book. you need to put up more details,
more feelings, more emotions, and make
it look beliveable. ex. there´s a few things
that is out of characters.

I don´t know, can be just me and my opinions,
but here it is.

overcoming that. I liked your idea.
very good plot and Iam eager to see how
it will end up. very funny and cute! XP

Okay, Im done bye bye n.n/

I really like your story and hope to read the next chapter soon.

I really like this, is one of the best time trvel fics I read, but there is a chapter missing, the one of Teddy Lupin! I love that baby, that's how I noticed, and the chapter 8 is twice. Anyway, keep it up (and write about Teddy, hehe)