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| oreoxlove4ever 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abusecontinue please =) great chapter! |
| Kagome Miko207 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseYES, YES, DA#$MIT YES! YOU SHOULD DEFINETLY CONTINUE THIS STORY! If you don't i will commit seppuku! No not really but i will go crazy if you dont! ^_^ PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! This is a really really great start! |
| the. wilted. flower 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseyes, continue. |
| x0SilverFeathersx0 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseYour story flows nicely, and it was nice to read the first chapter! Hope you update soon~ |
| pure happiness 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story please update soon and keep up the good work |
| lala 2008-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should totally continue! Its going great so far!! |
| Kage Yume Kodomo 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusecontinue |
| OtokoyoKitsune 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the way that you started off the story, nicely done. The discription was a wonderful add on to your story, though even without it it would have still grabbed my attention. I would really enjoy to see some more of your skills in this story if you wouldnt mind! Ja Ne~ Soen Kumori |
| update 2008-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease update |
| liltwilightkit 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abusePlease continue, and update your other Naruto fanfics, too! :D |
| QueenOfHalf-BakedIdeas 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseContinue! |
| Okashii Saru 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseYes, CONTINUE! Is Itachi really dead? Is Sasuke going to die? Is Shun okay? PLEASE! |
| An American Gypsy 2008-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove the new story you've got here! With the way you've started it off, I think it will turn out to be as good as Kazoku (which I hope we'll see a new chapter for soon). So Itachi didn't die, but rather he found his way into the Western Lands and met Kagome, and together they had Shunsuke. Well, that's certainly gonna be news for Sasuke and Fugaku; I wonder if they'll believe Kagome at first about Shun's paternity? Also, since Shun is not only a Uchiha, but also a Higurashi, does that mean he also has spiritual powers like Kagome, Kikyou, and I'm guessing Souta? Can't wait till you write more soon, because this is one killer fanfiction! |
| KibaSin 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseLove it! The way you've twisted the life of the Uchiha clan around is excellent, and I can only guess what could happen next. Plus, I want to see how the Uchiha clan will react when they realize that Itachi sired a child! You should continue it, but don't forget about Kazoku as you do. Kiba |
| kandy123654 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusei think that was naruto it was very unssacary for saskue to do that though |