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| narakunohime 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseloved it |
| Kirtash 2008-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi!I like your fic.i'm not used to read fics where Ginji begins XD,but it'was good!I thin Ban isnt going to sleep!Write more fics!Bye |
| Ice Dragon3 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseShort and cute. My only critique is a grammatical error with speech. You write speech in this style: “Watching you”, Ginji answered with a smile and stroke the man’s cheek. The comma should go within the parenthesis. So it should look like: “Watching you," Ginji answered with a smile and stroke the man’s cheek. It's just a small and repeating error that can be easily fixed. Everything else is very nice. :) |
| Howls-Princess-loves-Edward... 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI love it, that was so cute!! |
| Ginji-Hearts 2008-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this fic. Its really CUTE. The only thing is that it should probably be rated teen to be safe. Please keep writing. Your Fan, Ginji-Hearts |
| Ceda 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseHello! of course i like it! i love Ban and Ginji! and also this fic...you let the end, in our imagination... i like that! hope you can write some more! because i love your fics, and the way you write! until then! take care...bye! =) |
| dk-joy 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseCute! |