AMAZING! I, personally, love it. I think that you was fantastic. Z is all love. I love him and Zsadist have my heart. And your story too. Congratulations, girl. By the way, sorry by my bad English. I'm Brazilian and I'm not good with this things.

Wow-I've been reading Sons of Anarchy fanfic when I had an epiphany that Icould search for some BDB fanfic. :-) Brilliant! Great story! Thanks!

I just finished Z's story last night...sobbed like a baby when Wellsie died and was thrilled beyond belief when Bella came back and stayed with him. I like how you picked this to show how he decided to make that change. Z's my favorite brother (so far LOL)

Susan

I keep coming back to this story because it's so well written, it's canon-esque and just beautifully written. (any chance of you writing for trez and/or iam?)

Holy Cow!

That was great, I'm a HUGE Zsadist fan, so this was PERFECT for me. Great job!

So I just recently discovered the Black Dagger Brotherhood series and I am beyond obsessed. Zsadist is by far my favorite brother and I feel like you perfectly captured his personality. Just wanted to say bravo, and well done! Great story and I hope you continue to write more!

one of the best stories I have ever read, almost as good as the WARDen herself, the chracterization was so believable!

Awesome job!

I loved this read, because it made me picture poor Zsadist watching Bella from a distance brooding over what he could do to change and be a better man for her.

Zsadist is my favorite Brother!

that was really really good! hell i thought i was reading the actual book:)

I love it. Z and Bella, after the W&B, are my favorite couple. Especially since Z is so messed up, more so than the others.

I have been looking for some good BDB fan fic... and wow. You have NAILED Z. Pegged him right on. Brilliant. Perfection. Please write more. He's my favorite brother and needs more fan fic.

Awesome! I've been searching for quality BlackDagger Brotherhood fanfiction and this is it! Z's voice is perfect, all his insecurities and the whole idea that he was willing to do anything, to change the bastard that he was into someone Bella would be proud of (what he thought she needed) was dead on. Excellent characterization!

What a great read! I love the brotherhood, and I can't seem to find any good stories out there. I'm so glad I found yours!

That was so good! i really liked it. You had the whole 'Z voice' thing down pat, and it actually sounded like it came from one of the books. And it was so long! That is a very good thing :) Anyway, just wanted to let you know that I really, really liked that piece, and I was wondering if you are writing anymore JR Ward fanfics?

great,great job! i felt like i was reading it right out of the book! just really well done.