 vasilidor 3/2/12 . chapter 6i first read this years ago, and to this day i still hold out hope for an update. |
 Rose1948 12/4/10 . chapter 5Oh man... Shammi making like Pepe le Pew. ::fof:: I sincerely hope you can find a way to continue this to its completion, hon. I haven't had this much fun reading fanfic for quite some time. Even if it IS an oldie, it's still a goodie. |
 Rose1948 12/4/10 . chapter 4that omake was priceless! Made me want to read the Nathan Brazil books all over again!
Nice chapter. Thanks for sharing. |
 Rose1948 12/4/10 . chapter 3Nice chapter. I enjoyed it.
Oh gods... that dino omake was priceless! ::holds ribs:: |
 Rose1948 11/16/10 . chapter 2::snickers:: You, my dear, are a stinker. ::lol:: This chapter hurt my ribs from all the laughter! |
 Rose1948 11/15/10 . chapter 1::giggles self into oblivion after going back to reading this story once again:: |
 Progos 7/12/10 . chapter 3Random nitpicking of the alternate ending of the omake: in most reptiles (I believe including dinosaurs), the female is noticably larger than the male.
One problem in over three chapters is a pretty good success rate, I think. |
 Orchamus 5/18/10 . chapter 1Think I'm going to die of laughter. |
 Lord Sia 4/30/10 . chapter 3Oh, me like. Keep it coming. |
 Alex Ultra 3/28/10 . chapter 6Ahahahahahahahahahaha! *cough cough* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *gasp gasp* hehe *deep breath*
That Tigger thing is one of the funniest things I have ever read, and that's really saying something.
The story at a whole is also awesome. 3 Keep up the good work!
Alex Ultra: Just Noticed The Updated Date
LATER |
 wert1990 2/14/10 . chapter 6strange omakes |
 Encrypter 7/3/09 . chapter 5A classic.
Have you perhaps considered making a proper sentai series starring the Amazon girls? |
 Virosa 6/13/09 . chapter 1very good story. just one question... ARE YOU ALIVE! |
 Ganheim 5/3/09 . chapter 11: A Nervous Child (ANC)
"You call my kind yousei here, though my kind are called faerie elsewhere.
[Sounds plausible enough]
"Ranchan no baka,"
[Unnecessary Japanese]
a style of fighting they call 'martial arts'."
[‘Martial Arts’ are ALL styles of fighting (it does alternatively translate to ‘the arts of war’)]
the girls from that other High School had looked their way.
[But they’re in middle school at this point, there’d be no ‘other’ High School]
(Censored to keep this story from getting a Lemon label)
[Or you could try something with a hint of taste and class and sense and just skip over it. Even the implication, like ‘lemons’ themselves, serve to add absolutely nothing to the story]
"From oyaji's reaction
[Unnecessary Japanese]
that got Oyaji
[Unnecessary Japanese]
out of some chikan (groper)
[ Unnecessary Japanese]
Hidden Dragon. Ranma could seemingly negate his own weight, walking across the thinnest rice paper without breaking it or up a cliff or wall as if he had spider-powers.
[ Actually, I’m pretty sure this capability is something that folklore martial artists learned anyway. Movies like ‘Hero’ emphasize the point]
Or sharing with Oyaji,
[Unnecessary Japanese]
There was a danger for those who used chi to attentuate their lifespan, and that was ennui.
[
The purple-haired Amazon licked her lips - this guy wasn't too bad. Maybe another kiss, just in case.
[Okay, that’s funny]
Probably that baka Genma
[Unnecessary Japanese]
her transformed iinazuke.
[Unnecessary Japanese]
Simple objects, as long as they weren't made of metal?
[Problem is: you’d be surprised how many things have metal. We live in a composite society]
[ what the hell? Is this the same story? FOLLOWING:
:Better Father Than Genma Scenario.
:3) Get Him A Few Engagements/Rivals/Opponents Along The Way.
[How would ‘few engagements’ be a better father than Genma?]
"He can take apart a machine gun and put it back together blindfolded, pilot almost any military vehicle (he specializes in mid-air combat),
[Oh, something even _more_ useless to society than hand-to-hand combat!]
The first half of the story was interesting and would’ve made a fair story, but the second half of the chapter looked like you accidentally pasted a different story into it…one that did not by any means fit. It could’ve been good without that. |
 DarkBlueHated 4/25/09 . chapter 4I probably should have checked to see if this fic was still active before getting so hooked to it.. |