this was great, you did a good job on showing her thoughts on everyone

This was very different than most fics when it comes to writing form, not being written in past tense and all. But your writing is good, and I liked the fic. It was nice to see Jubilee and her feelings in the situation.

Well,another great story as always!

Hey Ashley,

Sorry about the lateness of the rewiew. Great story. I liked it a lot. Keep it up.

Tasha

Nice work! This was a good little insight.

Certh

wow, i liked it

Wow. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.