This an very well written story. I really didn't think that I would like a story of Charlie and a strong female character, but thank-you for proving me wrong on that bit. Will is a very interesting character and I like the way she has grown from chapter to chapter, it shows that she is an actual human character. Charlie's reactions to her are also pretty funny. :)

Oh, and they would be so cute together! :)

Keep it up and update soon!

Will there be more soon?

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That's how this chapter, and all the rest of the story, is making me feel. THE EMOTIONS ARE SO JAM-PACKED I CANNOT EXPRESS.

You are a wizard of words and story telling. A goddess of all that is literary. There's two more chapters for me to read and all I can think is "Shit I hope there's magically another chapter when I get to fourteen." Seriously: Oh my God. You're so unbelievably amazing and awesome and splendiferous. I am in utter awe.

You're alive! So thank you. Thank you very much[: Awesome update, and I can't wait for the next one!

I was so excited when I realized this was updated. You have no idea. I like the pace that it is moving, and how nicely you've portrayed Charlie. I can only hope you update again soon.

ohh wow! please update soon, this is absolutely amazing

Holy Balls, this was AMAZING! I was about screaming when they shot Charlie.

o, this chapter gave me chills! That guys a CREEP! Than again...Charlie's a killer...hahaha! That was mighty scary when he said her name, I was like Shit their not getting out of this one. Well, as usual, its AMAZING! 3

and then they wanted you to stay home and take care of the children.

3 LOVE IT! Love this SO SO oh SO much! Good writing, as always!

some time in bed with Green Eyes., The scorching heat was coming off the sand in more than waves; there were fucking oceans out there above the horizon - I really laughed at all that, YES CHARLIE FOREVER! Haha, this is amazing, I'm loving' the way you write! Best Yuma Fic I've ever read!

Sure she could. She was Will Slater, dammit. - Bahhaha! I laughed at that part, OMG! MORE CHARLIE! He's my favorite, and I'm very glad he's not out of character, its making me very happy, I really like this story, you're doing a grand job!

No not Charlie! I love him, and I'm glad he's mentioned :D

O! I really like it! Very well written!

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Amazing! Keep 'em coming please!Quinn

This is such an awesome story! can't wait for the next update!