Reviews for Melissa Comes to Town

German24-7 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseThis is a good story so far. But i would put more detail in describing Melissa and her sister, so we can actually "see" them. A couple of word errors. Just put more detail. Other than that it was a well written peice!
Kalle Madison 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseThat was such a sweet story. I love the dialogue you used!! just get rid of your name and you'll be good.
i love the twilight series 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abusethis is funny! I like the Big Bang Theory! Can't wait for the nexxt chapter.
Not of Gold but of sin 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuse"nerd boy" aww that it's so cute cuz is true lol! please continue, I would like to see where this goes.
RomanticDramadyGirl 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseIt's pretty good, although I didn't really feel like Melissa could really be related to Penny. It would have been nice if you had developed the relationship between Penny and Melissa, so that we could understand how Penny could have such a negative sister.