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Reviews For: Black and Black: Reckoning

Rundas
2008-05-30
ch 7,
abusevery good happy now? nyway i like it very muchim not a man of words yet so this is all i can b botherverd to rite so there
Mendez113
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseHey Isaac here, that was Awesome! XD

"Heroes are merely sacrifices made to confront absolute danger."
ratchetwriter
2008-05-04
ch 6,
abuseFor gods sake you b*, hurry up and write the next part because im hooked! Grammar was a little shaky, but i completley forgot as i was enthralled!
ratchetwriter
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseHi wedge, its me your friend Luke. I just read your story, loveed EVERY minute of it, although I would have liked a mention in your profile :P. I'm currently writing a story about some Kroot carnivore mercenaries, and was up researching their culture when I came across a certain 'wedge palmer'.

Really liked the story, and i'm going to miss you when you move school. Make sure you keep on writing and try to update all your other stories. Hopefully mine will be done by the time you go.

Just a few things, there were a few grammar mistakes, and i think you need to give more detail on the villagers, because at the moment they don't seem human enough. Maybe the god should have an emissary or some thing. Lol, anyway see you soon!
Smut Empress
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseAn interesting take. I think you've written it well, though I must say the emotion is a tad overwhelming from the get-go, much like entering Land 9 in the game, right? Hahaha.
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