Aw...poor Naruto. Though it is nice that he went traveling around.

Hmm...the seal weakening, eh? I liked how the ending went. XD I can't wait for more! ((And even though this story is a bit depressing, it has that edge that catches me.))

Update asap!

goddamn fox

YOU KILLED GAARA!

how many times must I say about the enormous despair this brings upon the readers? And it only does that because it's that good. -sigh- I need to find my happy place...or a happy fic (I think they're the same at this point)

I hate reading about the tragedy that is Naruto, the orphan, the hero, the loner, the forgotten...but I can't stop :(

Ah, Shikamaru's lost his mind! So mean! You did it well though, and Konohamaru is good too.

Poor Shikamaru and Kakashi...

But huzzah for Naruto being alive and young! -brick'd- I like how you continued this, as I found it rather interesting. Of course, he must be pretty sad at the fact that he missed his dream by a few days.

I just hope that as an end you make him restart life in a sense as goes forth towards a new goal. One that will bring him back to a wise Naruto we 'know'.

Keep up the good work!

this is very, very angst-ridden and surreal...and sad...and depressing...but none-the-less, it gets the ideas through. You're good at implying things and describing things indirectly which, I think, gives stories an air of mystery.

I'm assuming that Naruto is a young man in his prime and he hasn't aged beyond that...but wow, Konohamaru's a grandpa now?

I guess Naruto's situation can be described by my mutilated quote: When life gives you lemons, make lemonade. But if you don't have any sugar, it will still be sour.

like he's immortal and he's trying to make the best he can of it, but it still doesn't cut it. :(

Fast... way to fast. A Prologue, and maybe an epilogue would be good. If you consider the first paragraph a Prologue, you are sadly mistaken. More plot, more explanation of EXACTLY how Naruto became immortal because of Kyuubi, catastrophic events, blood, murder, extortion, eternal torture, Epilogue about how Kyuubi takes over Naruto's anguished mind, etc.

Hey, cool idea. Though you said that this will probably remain a oneshot, you might be able to turn it into a story. Perhaps you can get Sasuke to help him to die? Works well as a oneshot though.

Really great and awesome idea. I laughed at the thought of seeing an old Sasuke seeing a young-looking Naruto. -evil chuckles-

Too bad this was too short...

Gosh, this is depressing but you managed to create a mood so quickly, and for that, its really good. Although...was Naruto supposed to be a little boy or his adolescent self? And would he really flip off old people?

ok i have a request

DONT END THIS

this story has so much potential and you could do anything with it

please!