Wow...that was great. And it was a cool cliff hanger! Please, please write more! I beg of you. I like the way you described how Feuilly felt, and the life of Florine as a whore. So cool.

Great story! but where is Javert going? what will keep him going?

thanks for writing so well about my favourite character.

I can't offer any ideas at this time, merely encouragement. your characterization is enviable; it's a wonderful piece.

I really enjoyed your story,it's very well done. i Like how the characters are trying to convince Javert to give life a chance. You should consider bringing your rating down a notch though, but otherwise great work! _

Without a doubt, the best piece of Les Mis fan fiction I've ever read! Very descriptive. I loved it. You should really write more, a sequel (hint hint), another piece, just something more for us all to appreciate!

wow. Excellent writing, very powerful and moving. You've done an excellent job in keeping with the established charactisations in the books. Also liked the sneaky references to Victor Hugo and the musical. You have a very high standard of description, and you manage to maintain the same atmosphere throughout. Very good. Excellent work! Keep up the good and hard work :-)