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xXlil'eveXx 2008-07-18 ch 3,	abuseLOL OMGAWRSH! NICE ONE! IT HIT HER IT HIT HER! XD
xXlil'eveXx 2008-07-18 ch 2,	abuseWHAT DID YOU WRITE about Roxas and THAT DAMN LACY KISSING!?! WA T^T
xXlil'eveXx 2008-07-17 ch 1,	abuseLAWL! I love your chapter 1!! XD even though there's OCs in it it's still good! XD
lebrezie 2008-07-15 ch 3,	abusewell dang... but i was really hoping that Olette would make it, oh well...gosh darn tho... i mean, but oh oh! it was just like i predicted it...i wonder what is going to happen next? wink wink tehe. :D so yeah...update soon! and um, oh so predictions: in more detail... so yeah apparently um...Lacy got hit in the face...let me guess, her nose is bleeding...like crazy. ok so Olette is still really mad (she never fully got all her anger out) but i mean she still feels bad, so of course she tries to go over and apologize, but then Lacy is like BITCH get OUT OF MY FACE! and of course Olette is just like, well fine then! if you dont want my sympathy then you cant have it...and she storms off. meanwhile, all the guys are kinda like standing together talking about what just happened (see they are afraid to go over there...i mean they all saw what Olette did to Hayner) and they are deciding if it would be safer to go over as a group or in pairs... so naturally they ask their captain what he thinks, but he is already half way across the field...running after Olette... Sora sighs...and says something like 'why cant he just enjoy what he has, got to have every girl' aka...Sora is jealous, and he wants to date Kairi...cause they are a nice complementary pairing. so anyway, Roxas calls Olette's Namine (bye this time, they are exiting the field...through a chain link fence gate (just for descriptive purposes) and Olette turns around (she is still mad, and then Lacy made her like CRAZY mad) so she is like 'what are you doing, why dont you go and comfort your GIRLFRIEND?!) and that is why Roxas is like she is not my girlfriend, i didn't even want her to kiss me... Olette denies the fact, and Roxas is like (to himself) how am i gonna get this through her head...I dont like Lacy, I like Olet-- oh no. I do like her. or something like that! but he needs to crab her arm, and pin her to a wall...i mean that way he will be able to talk to her. so yeah...that was a long (and pretty descriptive prediction) dont worry, you dont have to use it at all anyway, thanks for writing this story, and update soon! BYE! :)
Lozzieh 2008-07-14 ch 3,	abuseYAY! YOU UPDATED! -parties- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! This time, it was your turn to kill me! I died.. with laughter.. x.x Tidus and the ref are the BEST. THE BEST. BEST~ MUHARHAR, LACY GOT SMASHED IN THE FACE LIKE SHE DESERVES! I would have just pointed and laughed. Pointing and laughing is fun.. :3
Dark Ambition 2008-07-14 ch 3,	abuseLawl, that was funny. W00t! Olette hit Lacy right in the face with the ball! Though, that can't be good for her. xD Up-a-muh-date real soon!
Fluffyfafa 2008-07-14 ch 3,	abusewoot woot! i already sent u my review XP ner but i'll review in 3 words anyways xD I.LIKED.IT.(ok, 5 words)A.LOT. x3
sorahyper 2008-07-07 ch 2,	abuseI AGREE WITH ROXAS! MRS. BROYZNA IS A BI-POLAR! LMFAO. First, she's like in a flirty mood trying to get jiggy wit-it with Mr. Washington, then she's teasing Roxas and Olette's very embrassing uh, "incident", then she's glaring at the two and giving them a five-page paper to write overnight, and finally is singing down the hallways! Hahaha, oh that Mrs. Broyzna. Your names :D Aw, ahah. They weren't TERRIBLE. (Trust me, I am not the best person to think of last names either). I liked yours :D Pence Wyoming was the funniest to me ahahha (: Loved the flames flickering between the two soccer teams! Hahahah, poor Riku being kicked "there" lmao. I feel his pain haha. That Joelle sounds like a girl who could push a guy to a wall and knock him out senselessly ahaha. Wouldn't want to be that guy haha. And the whole, "popular" girl being a bitch thing is now offical. First texting threating, whorish messages and getting an innocent girl in trouble, and now THIS! Roxas should punch the living daylights out of her :D I love your story! UPDATE SOON YEAH ? :D
sorahyper 2008-07-07 ch 1,	abuseAw, this story is sweet (: I love the whole typical highschool atmosphere in your story. It has the "popular" girl who is usually, well, a bitch hahaaha, it has the guy that all the girls end up falling for him and the "average" girl who ends up falling for him as well. This story is hillarious :D "Erm, Ladies first..." "You're too kind." She said sarcastically. Lmfao. And then Mrs. Brozyna is going to go flirt with Mr. Washington :O -insert dramatic gasp here- lmfao. She's trying to get fresh with him, even fixing her hair before walking out of the room ahaha. But, poor Olette and Roxas in the end of the chapter! Humiliated by Mrs. Brozyna! I would have turned redder than eight tomatos hahaha. Great story so far :D
Lozzieh 2008-05-13 ch 2,	abuse:3 Yay. MY POOR RIKU! -glomps Riku- >.< Kicked in the groin.. D; ANYWAY. How dare Lacy kiss Roxas! D:< -slaps her- I can't wait until the next chapter! Awesome job! 8D -Lozzieh.
Lozzieh 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuse-finds story- Yey! YOUR STORIES! -jumps up and down- n.n Lacy is a funny name. Harr. xP So is this based on you fantasy with that dewd you like, or is it just random for the story you had to do? -glomps, and hobbles to next chapter- -Lozzieh.
lebrezie 2008-04-20 ch 2,	abusehaha, Olette not wearing a watch...Roxas should take that up with her later...finally i conversation starter! haha. :) haha, and i have to say that my favorite name would probably be Selphie Mango. haha. Hilarious. :) anyway, woah. Once i read that 'captain' 'captain' thing i was like...ah, this could not end well...and then she had to go and kiss him. gross. blec. anyway time for predictions: lets see, Olette can like totally shun him...not because she is mad, but because she think that Roxas does not want to talk to her...hence his new 'girlfriend' even tho Roxas told her that he pretty much despised to girl. So yeah, here is the deal...all throughout the soccer game Roxas tries to talk to Olette...when ever they are dribbling around each other...he tries to tell her...but she you know passes the ball/ and or gets around him (aka making his team mad at him, for you know NOT concentrating enough) and then runs away. It is making Roxas kinda frustrated that you know she wont talk to him...so... ...at the end of practice when they are leaving Soccer ...Roxas is still trying to get Olette's attention, but she wont stop walking. So finally he grabs her wrist and pins her to a wall...ohh ROMANTIC! I can just picture the scene. :) anyway, UPDATE SOON! BYE! :)
lebrezie 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abusehaha. the teacher winked. HAHAHA! Poor Olette, if that was me...i would be so EMBARRASSED! that was hilarious! haha. normally i dont go for the Roxas xx Olette pairing, i am more of a Namine xx Roxas kinda person (duh...it is written all over my stories) but haha your story, it was just too cute. And of course very enjoyable! I have to say my favorite moment was when Roxas phone went off, and he turned around and smiled at Olette. Can i please have persmission to melt now, i pictured it, AMAZING! well off to the next chapter, nice job with numero uno! :) oh yeah...and i just thought i return the favor of all your reviews. I mean that was really great of you. My stats up like a million! so thanks! BYE! :)
Chigatana 2008-04-17 ch 2,	abusehmm pretty good not many roxette moments but has a lot of potential...hmm the oc's/ur freinds seems ok as well...i'd only say add more roxette but anyways it was good peace!
Lunar Roxas 2008-04-17 ch 2,	abuseCool! I have trouble with last names too. I thought it was great. Update soon!

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