Wow... I'm incredibly impressed with your writing technique and wonderful grasp of the characters and the Suikoden world. The subtle sorrow of each character is beautifully described. Thank you for writing this series of short stories. :)

Thats so saaaaad! But I thought oh nevermind. It was very good, the ending is just...oh booh ;_; but that was sooo good!

Beautiful job, Sir Windy _ Short bits of scenes were awkward at first when they suddenly appeared in the middle chapters, but hey, I do that all the time, too, so... might as well fix myself first. McDohl makes such a great character for writing death-fics. Whether it be angst-ridden or crisp-melanchoric (like this one), I like reading of the ways he choose his end. I was surprised to read this kind of work coming from you, no offense. I must say that I'm VERY impressed... you blew me away! *hugs*

Sugoi! *_* I really love this story.

Really, you did a great job.

It was well-written and the characters were portrayed well..so..

keep up the good work? Yeah, that sounds good.

Very interesting! You gotta write more! Lord McDohl is so cute - Good work! -

Your McDohl is sooo cuuute! And poor Jowy *huggles him* Good job! Keep up the good work! (pardon my lameness but i dont really know what else to say;; other than its nice)

I can't make any comment right now, because there're only the prologue and the 1st chapter. BTW, nice friendship presumption to the gensui1,2 leaders. Write the next chapter, kay?

What a ridiculous story! *Whacks himself for even attempting to write something* Anyway, good try, me. *pats himself on the back* I'm better off drawing or CGing... NOT! I'm good at none of this... *sigh* Windy, King of masochism