Very nice, you did a great job with the characters and I really enjoyed reading this!

Wow. Just... wow.

Utterly believable, well-written, well-conceived, heartwrenching and kinda cute...

Wow indeed ^_^

This was great! :D I really enjoyed reading it! :)

That's really neat! I love the glimpses of their childhoods -- I think my favorites were Ronon with his imaginary friend (the knives! hee!) and Rodney taking care of baby Jeannie.

Good characterizations, especially with John and Rodney. I loved the last paragraph on Rodney- I could totally see him acting like that.