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| Calenlass Greenleaf1 2008-07-07 ch 16,  | abuseOh, Aredhel definitely showed them. *grin* |
| Cloudy Eye 2008-06-11 ch 13, | abuseWell it's actually the best compliment I can give you that I made it through all thirteen chapters of this (which is practically unheard of for me). And it's great that you've got so much dialogue, yet it doesn't get old and forced sounding. Good job! :) |
| Calenlass Greenleaf1 2008-06-02 ch 12, | abuse*g* Favorite line: //“Who’d have thought Maglor would turn out to be twice as mature as two adults put together?”// |
| Birchbark 2008-06-01 ch 12, | abuse"I like Finrod. He's like and older sister, except he's a dude." XD I just love this story. Actually I love all your stories. Please, please update soon! |
| We stand victorious 2008-06-01 ch 12, | abuseHey, good chapter but try not to keep us reviewers waiting so long. |
| We stand victorious 2008-05-31 ch 11, | abuseHey, This is a good chapter and I like the whole big brother offering comfort thing:). Update soon Victorious |
| Jelly Cello 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseVery awesome story! Good job!XD |
| We stand victorious 2008-05-03 ch 9, | abuseCool story. |
| Annie 2008-04-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou know, I usually don't like these sorts of fics. I like the formal english and the older society. But, as a fan of Gossip Girl, I found this amusing and fun. It was an enjoyable read, and I'll be back to look for updates. |
| Pipothefreak 2008-04-12 ch 6, | abuseI'm looking forward to the party! :) Do continue please! :) |
| lyn 2008-04-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseHey, you're a very talented common thief! I didn't think I'd like a modern style of writing for a tolkien tale but it's working well. Oh Galadriel annoys me though (not meant as a criticism of you, just a comment on the character and so probably praise of you for writing her well) but the chapters just make me smile. Hope to read more soon. |
| Pipothefreak 2008-04-01 ch 4, | abuseOh... Is Aredhel in love? :D Keep writing! :) |
| Pipothefreak 2008-03-28 ch 3, | abuseThe names of Fingolfin, Finarfin, Fingon, Turgon, ... were not used in Aman. Those names are Sindarin, while they spoke Quenya in Aman. Fingolfin -> Nolofinwe Finarfin -> Arafinwe (something like that) Fingon -> Findekano Turgon -> Turukano The rest I don't know by heart, but even the Feanorions had different names... ;) At this point I like this story, but the story about Idril was better after 2 chapters! ;) Keep on writing! |
| Pipothefreak 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is just for the authors notes... I always have trouble with Elven ages as well, but I use the simple trick: 50 elves years is 20 years of men! :) It's quite easy to calculate then! :) About Galadriel: you might want to use her mother-name Nerwen... It means man-maiden, which is a quite accurate description of her |