I really liked this story! I bet you wern't expecting anyone to read it almost five years (at the least) later were you?

Sirius' is the write way to spell it. When the name or world ends with an 's' than te ' goes after the 's'

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I wish you had continued this on farther. But actually, that's not why I"m reviewing this... I just wanted to say that your use of Sirius' wand was correct. You use the s's on improper nouns, like business's, but you use only the end apostrophe on proper nouns. I looked it up in an APA style book a couple weeks ago.

Okay, so it's been almost eleven years since this was published, but still...I had a need for some Marauder-era HP fiction, and this filled it nicely. I liked the "Werewolves came to mind, but Lily firmly pushed the thought to the side and steeled herself" comment particularly, nicely done.

-Lee x

i like this, it's interesting. good job. :)

Hey hey :DD I found your story in searching stories about Marauders - I couldn't help me to take a look at your story, I'm always fond of stories about them :D -

Well, I liked your story very much. I think it's the first OS I read about Lily discovering the Marauders' secret. - I usually read this in very longs fanfictions - it's very good related - for the little I appreciate the English stories :D - I'm just a bit desappointed that we don't know when Lily will tell James about his secret. It would be very interesting too.

Well, good continuation and see you soon ! ;D

Goutt2mer

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This was a lot of fun to read! I was insanely curious to see if Lily was going to confront them on their transformations, but I really enjoyed how you played it out. The last little comment on their "ridiculous nicknames" had me laughing! Thanks for the great read! :)

Another great little MWPP fic. I can’t wait to read more of your work.

That was really good! I think it was good idea that Lily decided not tell that boys she knew, but I am curious to know what would have happened if she did. Would they really end up fighting? I grinned when Lily's friend made her promise to cover for her when she sneaks her boyfriend in the dormitory since she sneaked James in. That was funny! Good work!

I can really imagine this actually happening in the books :)

I enjoyed your story. I've always wondered why more writers haven't imagined how Lily discovered the animagi. I like your version except for her not divulging that she knew. But perhaps she told them post-Hogwarts ...

That was great, very well written. One question- you might have a companion to this that explains, I didn't check thoroughly, but how does Lily know how to work the Map? Did james explain?

nice story! james was really sweet when he was so concerned about lily! though i think that lily should have told james that she knows! anyways- great job!

No it's "Sirius' wand" not "Sirius's wand"