This is the best story I've read so far that have the actually meaning and story to what was meant to happen. Although I'm a Roxiri fan, ...wait. I think I lost where I'm going with this..GREAT JOB! :D

aww... super cute. it was really good! it makes me yearn for summer even more now. haha.

~SorasKey

Aw So cute! I luv it! It sad what Forbidden Love can do, anyways keep it up!

aw... cute! good job! xD

havent seen your stories for a bit. sorry! and also I havent started on my dear diary story for Alexa. I just dont know how to begin it. :( i need help! xD

anyways, keep it up! update!

=Alexa xD

NGAW~!

thats so adorable =)

sora and kairi. they are so awesome together =)

that whole beginning with roxas. thats was like WHOA! i actually liked it =)

GO YOUU~!

omg twist ending O_o i thought it was RoxasxKairi. and it was. but also SoraxKairi? x_x RoxasxNamine? lol
aw that kinds sucks though. that they didnt end up together D:
so Kairi loved Roxas but was IN love with Sora? and Roxas loved Kairi but was IN love with Namine? >_< poo, it didnt seem that way. i was so sure that Roxas and Kairi would somehow end up together!
by far one of you best works yet :D i love you sentence structures. the words come out very smoothly