wow. really well done.
thanks so much for this!
~celia~

aw i loved it! that was amazing i like how you didnt use much dialouge but still got the message through. (:

good chapter & more please

Good chapter.

I'm sad the Lorelai and Rory's relationship is like it was in Season 6. But... Rory's making a mistake! (Ha. Rogan lovers can pretend they're right for each other but Literati lovers know best.)

Good job

Very good ending, it was very complete. I liked that Rory and Jess re-established their relationship, especially with her being incredulous about him letting her borrow his car as per her request. And that she made up with Lorelai, who was impregnated by Luke, darling Luke.

Good work (I'm so formal), I look forward to reading more from you!

Aw, Jess likes Conan? I love Conan! Again, I love the Rory thought process, it's phenomenal.

Haha, I loved Luke's description of that t-shirt! So Jess...

Oh, Jesus, that was perfect! I like how portray the high society constricting Rory through her wedding planner.

I liked the guy behind the counter "You're not wearing any shoes." Quite the Captain Obvious.

Run, Rory, run! Ugh, who would want to have have ditsy drunk friends for the rest of their life?

Ah! Stop hanging up on Jess!

That reminds me of when Rory was reading a book at Madaline's (or was it Louise?) party in the first season and how she just sat down and read a book. A very 'Rory' move for a less than 'Rory' Rory. I'm sorry, that makes no sense.

The narration of this story is wonderful, seriously.

It made perfect sense, don't worry!