I really like how the plot is developing especially Seras´ acceptance for some of her feelings. I loved the sexual tension in the chapter! I love it! Amazing. Please more soon.

I'm falling head over heels in love with this story! It's so beautiful! You are a really good writer, you build tension and apprehinsion and let it explode without losing all of the excitement and do it all over again.

Wow. This chapter really choked me up. You handled these characters amazingly.

Your plot is really original and interesting. You managed to create something real and that actually makes sense. The characters' feelings, thoughts and reactions are well-described.

Really, congrats on such a nice piece of fiction!

Very good. Very intence. Well written.

i like this stroy and i like to know what happins in it please write more

AH!

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!


AH!
update soon!!

LOVE IT! UPDATE!

That was wonderful! I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this masterpiece.

come on! finish it plez! i love the story so far ^^ you cant just leave it on a clify

Yeah! It's really good! I'm loving this story and every chapter that I've read so far. ^-^ Please continue on my friend.

I absolutely love this story, definately the best hellsing fanfic I have ever read.
Love how this story has been written as well.

loved it.

This is really catchy. a very interesting outlook of the whole Hellsing thing. I guess it's cause i'm not entirely sure where it fits. which actually makes it much more interesting.
so ok, no more rambling. I like it so far. Looking forward to see how it all pans out.
Happy Writing

I really like it! It flows great and I appreciate the use of actual language in coherent writing! lol I really can't stand authors that write with broken sentences and such, so it is a true pleasure to read a story like yours. Great work, and I hope you update soon!