nice job :)

Oh, that was beautiful. I was a little worried about the whole thing when I read in your author's notes that this kind of writing (using anatomy rather than metaphors) was not what you usually did. But, I needn't have worried. It was brilliant. The words flowed together naturally and the ending was very tender.

Please write more stories!

RC

wow, -at a loss for words- very hot... *drools*

Cheers,
Zilander Kat

wah...hot...ehh...*chokes*
I think I just DIED of an internal nosebleed! O.O
I'm sure this had many doing the same!
It was the words? Really, it was XDD hahaha
I feel the love too Matt :D

O//O
So sexy...so delicious...so hot...
-faints-

mm this story is awesome and delicious. what an adorable ending, it made me sigh and smile :) i love it xxoo

*Cough*
I always wondered why chocolate sauce was not a more frequent addition too Matt/Mello stories. Really seems like it should be.

I'm kind of wondering what kinky things could be done with MelloXMattXStove, which is probably a sign it is, for the third night in a row, way to late to be up reading fanfiction and I should really go to bed.

But, it was brilliant.

wow... i want a stove like that... XP

LOL Matt really needs to go outside and do something if he can't think of anything that could past the time. I knew all that chocalate would come in handy.
It was a great smut scene too, with just enough details.
Great job Miya!!

MelloxMattxStove 4-ever!! xP loved this story although when matt was bored and decided to 'entertain himself' i have to admit i slapped myself on the forehead xP -gives many digital hugs-

I loved it. Descriptive yet not too vulgar, and it was nice to a at least a little bit of plot, but not enough to overwhelm the sex lol. Really funny to, especially the stove part!

*glomp* I love you Miya-sama! This was so good, I can't describe the hotness! >.< I can't describe anything about it! You did it too well already xD Awesome job, and I can't wait for more yaoi, if there is any haha

ps. My ot3 is MattxMelloxChocolate...any kind of chocolate, so you kinda REALLY made my day xD

LMAO- THE STOVE! THE SIZZLING, SEXY STOVE! Matt's such a dork. WE ALL LOVE!! M&M: Sex(y) beasts.
Anyway, that was awesome. The humor was nicely put and you made laugh a few times too. The part with Matt banging his head in frustration for not getting excited gave the funniest image. GREAT JOB! It was a worthy read.

*simply sits there staring at her screen, her mouth hanging open, for several minutes before bursting out* I'M SO GLAD I CLICKED THAT LINK! My friend had been going on about how so many fics were under appreciated in the Death Note category, and this is one of them! WHY DON'T YOU HAVE A BILLION REVIEWS?! If I could give this fic a medal, I would!!
You write beautifully (yes, even with words such as "**" and "dick" in there). And the stove thing had me rolling on my couch! I couldn't breathe for a minute!
I'm going to go raid your account to try and find more MxM stories by you. You're BRILLIANT!!

Funny near the begining and fluffy smut at the end. A wonderful combination. Very well done.