bloody good keep going big man or woman

This was a really sweet story. I really enjoyed what you did with Clark and Chloe and the premise was certainly original... also, massive points for making reference to Red Son.

good story

The dialog was well executed, very in character. There were some lines that made me laugh out loud.

I never thought of the comparison between Jimmy and Clark but you have a good mental eye and now I can see your point. Nice story. :)

I absolutely loved it. Beautifully written. I fell in love with this story :D

LOVE IT!

Aw how sweet! -gives it an A+- Going to make any more of these ClarkxChloe moments?

This was a great one shot! I loved it!! The Chlark was awesome and the way you wrote this was just amazing! I hope to read more of you stuff in the future!!