Well written and phrased and all )!

Your writing style is very...elegant. You're just an amazingly talented author, and I know that to be true even after reading this 200 word story. Keep up the great work.

Interesting, though I really doubt Ephraim would hit a target that far with a bow xD

Good concept and good delivery, keep up the good work!

It was a cute little story and I enjoyed reading it. I only have one thing to point out, which is that aiming is actually EASIER with one eye shut, so making a shot with one eye shot is not necessarily an impressive feat. Aside from that, it seemed pretty much in-character and very believable. There's so little InnesxEirika about and it's nice to see a good one pop up. I hope you'll do more on this couple...?