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Reviews For: The Ones Left Behind

L.A.H.H.
2008-05-08
ch 6,
abuseNice alternative ending, pity it's not the one that would actually happen, you know. Great story though it was so sad. Thanks for writing it.
StevieGerrard
2008-04-29
ch 6,
abuseVery nice story. One of the best fanfic I've read. Very insightful and thoughtful.
alextheripperlol
2008-04-22
ch 5,
abusenice last bit, i dont think the stopping on the news for a seuiside victim was very like james but thought it was god

alextheripperlol ha ha ha
alextheripperlol
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abusem never thought of lauren in missions really useualy i find her boaring and annoying, this sort of conflicts with some of the stuff in the books, she says stuff like her and whoever she was with at the time dont like snogging that much but ill let u off lol
alextheripperlol ha ha ha
IndigoCrayon
2008-03-30
ch 6,
abuseThis was a fantastic story. How come it didin't get more reviews? it was short and sweet and quite well-written. though it didn't really need an alternative ending.
EthanWykes
2008-03-29
ch 5,
abuseJess you have to stop writing such sad stories or i will cry on you.
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