BSG/Doctor Who crossover! This story is great, keep it up.

A wonderful chapter that was very well paced and continued the excellent standards of characterizations I have come to know and appreciate from this author's work. Love the Librarian, a wonderful creation and great banter with Kara. Thank you for sharing this!

Billis was that old guy Jack and Tosh ran into right? And he has or had a connection to the Master...well that explains a bit. Looking forward to seeing what he plans for the device, not to mention Kara's reaction when she finds out she's actually on Earth.

Having only seen bits and pieces of Torchwood, I have to conceed that I am not that familiar with the show. I've seen enough of the new Galactica to understand it. Could it be that Manger is a renegade or someone who dealt with them and got some material for his assistance?

Very nice! Kara is not going to be amused when the Torchwood let slip she's on earth, which they're bound to sooner or later!

Great Chapter

Thanks.

Looks interesting. Can't wait to see what happens when Torchwood comes across a Time Lord that's not the Doctor. And considering they only know of two Time Lords to have survived the Time War, it doesn't bode well for the Librarian, or Kara by extention.

Time Turd, Chatrocity? Why, young man, in my days we simply said "Sh*t" or "B*ll*cks"

Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I love your creation the Librarian and the fact of Kara as a companion. She really does need a break and she's actually likable in this different setting. Great range of emotivity here and I like how the characters reached their conclusions, nothing spelled out yet written so one 'thinks' with them. Well done, I'm looking forward for more!

Ok that's a really evil teaser!

Very nice. Glad to see your writing a sequal!