cute little story.

Aw! Cute. Haha. wow. Good thing Scotty boy came before Logan kicked Alex in his whatnuts. I mean Whatnots. sorry. Haha. You got Logan spot on there.

I love this idea, and yes when I first read it I thought that might be THE flight the Summers family was heading out for.

I wouldn't mind seeing this idea explored a bit more, if you're ever so inclined.

Good stuff!

Great one-shot, and yeah I did check out pictures of the lake it's beautiful :D

Oh wow. I looked up pictures of that lake. It's gorgeous. I've heard that the water around Greece is like that too, but I've never been.

Anyway, this was AWESOME. I love how... cold you made Scott. Ugh... I hate kids like that. Thank God most of my cousins are hyperactive like me. XD Anyhoo, I loved it and I am adding it to favorites. :D

If you want to read it, I have a X-Men story on my page. It's about Scott when he's younger. Sort of like a memoir. But I need readers for it so if you could check it out, review, you know? That'd be really nice. :) Thanks!

-Old Fiat

Wow, that was great! It's one of those spooky 'could-have-been's' which might have worked!

BTW: That lake if gorgeous! I want to go there!! (Before it turns to crap when all the ice melts! lol)

Great story! I love your concept and how you made them meet right before important events in their lives happened. Scott does seem the kind of kid who would lecture an adult...he-he.
G.S.1307

Very nice little story. I liked your voice for Logan. And I always pictured Scott that way as a kid too. LOL!

Good work.

This is really good!