This really is wonderful work. I love how you take your time exploring the characters, their interactions, and the situations they get into. In this chapter, for example, I love that you take the time to show how it hurts Mal to see his home in such a state. It adds richness to the story that wouldn't exist if you were just careening from plot point to plot point. I do have one minor crit, though. Sometimes you switch between present and past tense, and while that's not a big deal, especially since your writing is otherwise so good, it can be a little jarring. Anyhow, I hope you're able to keep working on this story!

I just want to stop a moment and say that I love how you're taking The Train Job and using it as a platform for some good old fashioned Doctorly meddling - with Rose by his side!

Absolutely amazing. All three of your stories in this series are wonderful, well-thought out, and best of all, have great grammar. I can't wait to see what happens next! Out of curiosity, will the Doctor ever regenerate? Or is this series going to be purely Nine?

This is just... addicting. It's like crack. Like skittles. You can't just have one skittle... *worships*

Hello GM Andy.
I have only just discovered you and your work, but I have to say - GOOD JOB!
Also, KEEP WRITING!
I'm enjoying the Mutant Plot Bunnies and where they're taking the characters in all three worlds you're meshing with. And yes, the pun was fully intended.
I'd never thought of the Doctor or Riddik as Patriarchs to a large-ish family before you so gracefully painted the scenes, but I find that it's not as alien a thoughtline as it would have sounded had anyone brought up the topic before I'd read these.
So, PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!
I don't want bananas or jellybabies. Just feed me more chapters and I'll be happy.

Thanks again for the ride, now move it on.

Seren D Petty.

When I first saw this fusion of Dr.Who, Firefly and Riddick I thought to myself "How the heck will that work?" Then I started reading the first part and was completely hooked by the end of the first chapter. Now I keep my eyes open for the next wonderful chapter. I've recommended these stories to many friends as a great example of excellent fanfiction and will continue to do so. Thank you GM Andy for a truly enjoyable read.

great chapter update soon!

hi, i was so hapy to see this this morning. i had not been feeling well, and this just cheared my up. it was really good. please add more soon.

Awesome! I love the way you have Mal work the man around from 'going to string you up' to awe. I love what you are doing with this story as always and can't wait to see more. Sighs in contentment.

PS Happy Easter!

Poor Mal, he's just ain't got the luck...at least Kaylee got lucky. Got a little confused on the last two chapters, course my printer trying to run out of toner didn't help with the understanding. Sorta hard to read, that. ^_^ Anyhoo, here's to happy endings (not soon please) and hoping that Jon gets it all sorted. and thanks for the link to the (cough) adult version :-) Cheers, later - mirth

Oh man that so bites! They so need to get Mal and Serenity out of their ASAP. I do so hope the Doctor got what he needed to insure that River can be fixed/helped and that they can get rid of that horrid parasite. The Doctor needs his Verity as well as his family.

ops. that could have gone better. at least the doc found his info. this is really good. please add more soon. i cannot wait to read more.

Oh wow, I am on tenterhooks! I started the first story two days ago and have been reading non-stop for nearly the entire last 72 hours. XD These stories are so beautiful it makes me shiver. The personification of the TARDIS--Verity...Riddick now known as Richard...Simon, River and Jack all related...it boggles my mind how skillfully everything is drawn together and I'm astound at how much of your stories make perfect /sense/. The stories exist in the spiritual/mental realm as much as the physical and I LOVE it. I look forward with bated breath and no fingernails ;-) to the next chapter. I'm so excited about what is to come!

Ah very nice! I am so glad that mal is starting to soften up a bit. He really has been under quite the stress and its good that he realizes that the Doctor really does mean him no harm. Good play that last bit by Rich and Harken may think that he just has two more interviews they are defiantly going to be interesting ones. *Big smile* Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Actually the whole set of stories.

thank you for granting my wish. this is always so good. i go a little ster crazy waiting for this wonderful story. please add more soon.