wow. i really love your veiw of ianto. how you dont just make him so focused on jack. i think you portrayed ianto beautifully. i agree that people dont just stay true to one person. it's impossible, since people fall in and out of love all the time. really nice. i like your storys

Brilliant. I'm kind of at a loss for words.

Excellent writing and chaatcerisation. You have some lines in there I wish I'd written myself.(Ianto was about 20 percent sure that he didn’t want to die, but he could easily work those numbers down to zero before Jack put a bullet in his head.) It's always great to have anew way to look at a character's motivation-sleeping with Jack as some kind of penance and not really wanting Jack to make a committment. Excellence!!

well written. It sounds like Ianto but...I guess I see him as a deep thinker. big on contemplation

cool!

I loved this fic, beautifully written and very enjoyable to read, really nice characterisation of Ianto. x

oh...ouch! this is fantastic and heartbreaking. lovely stuff.