Very good story- very good. You managed to capture their relationship perfectly.

I've only seen four episodes, but I like it. I'll have to get a hold of it now that it's on DVDs.

SUPER! Excellent. Enjoyed every minute of it!

That was really well done, your description was so detailed and well written. A pleasure to read. Thanks.

Oh what a beautiful moment you've depicted here, my dear!

Definitely spot on for the charas- I never would have guessed you hadn't written them before.

And may I just say, for a little storm baby like me, the setting was utterly delicious. Poor Nat being freaked though lol

Great Story

Excellent MI!! I really like it! You caught both Steven and Natalie very well! Write more!

I may not know the show, but I know damn good writing when I see it. This, as usual, is phenomenal, lyrical, thoughtful...just plain wonderful.

And that last line made me GUH out loud, enough that K stuck her head out from the office and went, "Did Alamo Girl update again?" Yeah, you have a reputation in our house. Congrats on both fronts, kiddo.

Now to Chapter Nine of "Home"! :)

No thanks needed. It was easy to throw out opinions on something so GOOD! And my stars, where did all the hyphens go? hee hee

I'm sure I've already told you this but... it was smashing. Why? Because, as Dr Who said, we tend to stretch out what we wish we saw into something beyond what the original writers gave us. But this could have been an actual scene (could have/should have). We all like canon and sticking to what we know of the characters and sometimes we take way too many liberties. However strong your temptation might have been, you held fast and created something that we shippers can strain to see love in (with the head-thoughts) but also something that would have fit on the screen with any existing episode (with the verbals). There's fighting, there's comfort. And to my depression, no smooching. But that's what makes it true.

Details are like oxygen here, plentiful and nearly invisible. Because they're seamlessly woven. Where his hands are, what she's seeing, the storm's mood. And yes, all that chest contemplation does a girl's mind good!

If I made a list of everything I liked about this story, it would go on for pages. Sadly, the carpal tunnel will not allow me to write more than several sentences without flaring up, so... this is about as in depth as I can get:

The Characterization was spot on, as was the mood of the piece. I myself fall victim to making the feel of the story completely opposite of what Medical Investigation is, but this story sticks true. High five for keeping the Nat/Con relationship real. And one last sentence: Do, please, write another story.

Syd