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| f 2008-06-25 ch 14, anon. | abusei think |
| Black Wolf Jaganshi Lover 2008-05-20 ch 16,  | abuseHuh. Good story! Cept...it was kind of a lame way for the dramatic battle to end, Tigerpelt drowning. And a weak ending...but still good! |
| Katie B 17 2008-05-17 ch 16, | abuseew didn't he just brack a rule by eating that mouse! =) i love this story! warriors rule this book is the best! =) |
| Leafecho 2008-05-04 ch 8, | abuseOh my gosh! I go and not check up on this story for... what... a moon, and you've finished it... Not quite finished reading it yet, I forgot the plot... (serves me right for being lazy and not coming on here...) But I still think you're Erin Hunter in disguise! Either that, or you are just one amazing writer! |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-04 ch 16, | abuseHmm... I read this entire stories in 2 days... but it was very good! It had an intricate, unique plot, but gave a bit of ruthlessness to the StarClan cats. I'm not they'd WANT kitties to die... Thanks for mentioning Orangestripe in the last chapter - I hadn't been sure about her kits, because they hadn't been mentioned in a while. And the constant repitition of name prefixes was a bit confusing, but I can understand. It can be hard to think up lots of names at once. Very good job with the story, overall. I'll be eagerly anticipating Life & Death. |
| Tanfeather of AmberClan 2008-04-07 ch 15, | abuseu rock! see u on im 2mrrow |
| Tanfeather of AmberClan 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusekewl |
| Tanfeather of AmberClan 2008-04-03 ch 13, | abuseI LOVE U! i mean your wirting |
| Icestar of MistClan 2008-04-03 ch 13, | abuseGreat story!Keep the chapters rolling! Story has the longest chapters I've ever seen. |
| Tanfeather of AmberClan 2008-04-02 ch 12, | abusehi |
| Tanfeather of AmberClan 2008-04-01 ch 11, | abuseI know whats not right! He is so sad for exposing Redpaw! |
| MushroomT 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It could be a bit longer, but that's okay. Some people like to have short chapters. This is exciting. I'm going to read the second chappie! |
| Tanfeather of AmberClan 2008-03-31 ch 10, | abuseWHY NOT SILVERPELT? |
| Leafecho 2008-03-29 ch 6, | abuseAMAZING! Even better than my buttered toast! And you have 6 chapters up in hardly any time at all! I LOVE the story too. Are you SURE you're not Erin Hunter? =) |
| Qzil 2008-03-29 ch 2, | abuseIt's a good concept, but it's impossible to have a warrior named Silverpelt. How about Silvercoat? Silverpool? Silvertail? Silverfur? |