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Your such a good writer ! This is great ! Makes me wish there had been more to this story :)

Write more , your great at it :D

I simply cannot believe this. I know people must have an "artistic" response - ANY response to what happened months ago, but I think that this pisses on the line as it crosses it. Fact is fact, fiction fiction, and the two intersect most passably in elegant allegory and most brutally in this sort of work. I'd ask you to take this off if you have any respect for the dead, but I'm sure your value your artistic response far too much. Email me if you want a real flame.

thats a very original view on things. (i usually see stories with similar plotlines...but that threw me.) you're a good writer, keep posting :)

Oh, wow...this was great! Actually, just saying that it's 'great' is too shallow...I'm not very good at description, so mere words cannot tell you what I thought of this fic. I *finally* went out and rented myself The Matrix so I could review your fic and actually understand it. This was incredible, the descriptions are wonderful...kudos to the author!

This is very, very good. I'd love to read more if you continue it, if not, I'd love to read something else of yours. Usually I don't like fanfictions, but I havent seen one actually done well before. Its awsome _ You reveiwed my Joan of Arc letter, and are the only person I know who's actually read the Mark Twain book. Its what gave me the idea in the first place...e-mail me sometime, you sound interesting *grins*

Except for one crude part, it's good!

Using the terrorist attack to write Matrix fanfiction. *sigh* I'm trying not to be mean, but this story really doesn't belong here. It doesn't belong anywhere.

I liked it a lot, mainly because it has the attack involved, but doesn't focus completely upon it. Good work.

wow... that's really.. weird o.o it's written really well tho. I like it :)

Realy great!