this is really good, I really like it. you put just the right emphasis on all parts of the story, not just one aspect.
I like the anticipation on seph''s part, very clever.
You've no idea how much you've helped me considering I just started RPing Zax as a future partner to Sephiroth situation. thanks loads.

This is my favourite Zack/Sephiroth fanfic I've ever read. _ It's sweet, entertaining, and truely believable. I just love it!

I don't know why, but somehow this Zack/Sephiroth pairing is getting more and more attention from me. This was very well written and I hope you'll write some more of this pairing when you have the time.

VERY good...of course, I expect no less from the great Lady Maiko. It would've been nice if they could have had one date as a real couple though. Sephiroth was kept mostly in character, a definite plus for the fanfic.

I liked this very much. I think it would have done the story justice to lengthen it a bit.

I LOVE this fanfic, U realy need to right more to it. This is my favorite couple, along with Cid & Vincent. You are a great auther. I will have to check out your other works.

P.s. Heero & Duo are also real Kool

Wonderful storyline. I really love this coupling (planning on writing my own fic about it actually .). The only thing I feel I need to point out is that you have a tendancy to tell and not show. Showing, in most cases, improves a story a great deal. A good example of that is "At first, Zax had been someone Sephiroth could stand. Now, he was someone Sephiroth wanted around." It would have been much more effective to *show* us that he wanted Zax around, to show that acquaintence blossom into a friendship and then into more. You did this to an extent, but showing instead of telling would make a good fic great. Zax's characterization was exceptionally well done. Very good work. I look forward to reading more by you .

...0_0...ok...that was weird...

*sighs blissfully* Ah, some ZaxxSephiroth at last... You never find any of that... (Probably because it's my favorite pairing...) *Megumi Takahashii, the Angemon no Miko*

Very freaking awesome! Very, very, very good work. I like any story with Zack-sama, although this was very nicely done. Great work.

*_* I love the interaction going on... and how it got into Seph's mind _