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Reviews For: The Sun Sets in the West

Yorke0593
2008-06-23
ch 1,
abuseThis was such a good piece. Lovely characterization of Ilse. For quite some time I've been attempting to muster up a fic of post-SA Melchior, but it hurts too much to try. I'm not sure that I like the pairing, but I believe both Melchior and Ilse have a lot to take from each other. I look forward to seeing more from you.
GreyTwine
2008-06-21
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this. It was a great idea that was well-executed. I liked the in-control/wise Ilse and the savior aspect. Good writing, good ending, good job.
House-M.D.-Lover
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseI love the imagery.
My favorite part is how both Melchi and Moritz are faced with the same situation. But instead of killing himself, Melchi goes home. It's so sweet.

P.S.
If you get a chance, please R/R my story.
Anidori-Kiladra
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. I think that Ilse would be a sadder seductress, if she was one at all, but I liked Melchior's transformation, and Ilse's ghostly white hands.
~Ani
citeyoursource
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is a wonderful story. You are great at describing the setting and the emotions of Melchior and Isle, and they were both in character. Great job, and I hope you will continue to write stories. =)
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