this is AMAZIN! its so different and i love it! when is the next chptr coming out? u havent posted for a long time. i hope u didnt put it on hold, cause im insanely obsessed with this! is the next prt of the story gonna reveal more of allen's past to the elrics? the SUSPENSE!

ooh please update soon!

aw poor leenalee feels unloved!

That was a really good story.

Hey I'm wondering if maybe I'd be able to edit your story for you. I'm only 15 but I'm wanting to become an editor later on in life. I also wanted to write my own Al/Ed story sometime and you've inspired me to do so.

I would be deeply honoured if you'd let me edit your story, if you do not want me too however I will understand perfectly.

Please update soon though, I like this story alot.

Allen, Edward, Edward,Allen. Two of three of my favorite characters. Both great individually. Togther? *smirks evilly* ...Even better...

Wow, this is really good! You've combined two of my fave Anime's into one! ^_^ So no complaints here! I like it!

Wow. Angry outburst in the beginning.. Haha. Anyway, just read through all 4 chapters.. It sounds okay.. And don't worry about the time period.. It's creativity!! ^^

this is funny! i never thought a cross-over would be so good! please update soon! i want to know what their plan is!

Very nice story!Update soon!

UDATE! Or else Tykki Mikk and Road will come for you!!(That's how i saw on wikipedia they said to spell)

PLEASE UPDATE! Story is absolutely WOnderful! It's Marvolous! It's a work of art not even the Millinium Earl can beat!! (Ok...now im just flattering you for Chapters...But i think im doing a great job!! XD)

the scar is on his left eye but the story is still good!

eh, i kinda skip the mushy parts between Allen and Ed... as i said before, i dont like that pairing that much.Mana does sound like a girls name! lolness anyway, does Al like lenalee? its kinda obvious...anyway! keep it up nya!
~Lonely Kitty

eh, i really dont like the edward/allen pairing (though it sounds like a good one) i just dont like it. but ill stick around anyway,hmm, was the Alchemist of any imortance? but keep it as it is now. keep it up nya!
~Lonely Kitty~

heh heh, well, this is new, ill stick around for a while, keep it up nya!
~Lonely Kitty

8D MAKE ALLEN HAVE CROWNED CLOWN! I WANNA SEE WHAT YOU'LL DO WITH IT! *waits for next update*