Wow, I don't think I have read anything quite this disturbing for some time. Anyway, it was very well written, just really disturbing.

I GONNA KILL YOU KAIBA! *Chases said CEO*
Kaiba; IT WAS ONLY A FIC! C'mon! AH! PUT. THE. CHAINSAW. DOWN.
Jou: *crying* How could you! WHY ME!
Yuugi; Why am I here? *Reads the fic* DIE KAIBA!
Kaiba: KILL THE PERSON WHO WROTE IT! NOT ME! AND I PRETTY SURE THAT JOU IS STILL A VIRGIN...Are you?
Jou: None ya!
WAH! This is so sad! Why kaiba!? WHY?!
Kaiba: The author wrote it! Not me!
Jou:Good, so you won't rape me?
Kaiba; Never said that
Jou:Yeah, I'm going to run and never come back now *runs off with Kaiba on his tail*
I feel so sadistic! Why did I enjoy this!? I growled! Growled at Kaibe, or really to myself considering he's a fictional character. But really, did ya's have to go that far? Hm, you should write what happens after this, maybe I can

O.o It's so dark...but I liked it. *feels like such a sadist*

annie: I...I...I love it! Please do something like this again.
bea: what I say, we're a group that likes this kind of stuff even this will scare our creator's mind for life.
seth: I feel bad to Jou though but still, it's great and we love it. You rock!

This was the best Kaijou rape oneshot. I love it!

I enjoyed reading this fiction.

Yay! I love when I get to read a good Dark Kaiba fic. Few people do it correctly, but wow, you've impressed me. Kudos to you!

i dont have a dev art profile thingy yet but um... wow that was special write more that was awesome! mentaly scaring but awesome!

I really like this! (sad that I liked it...) I mean it's good it's just well seriously I want to know what Kaiba thought as he did this. What was he thinking when he said see? (okay I pretty much have a good idea but still...) If you could I would love it if you made a second chapter to this or a sequel in Kaiba's POV

Hey! It's me again. Can I say...I'm in a state of...static blankness? Lol, once again, your writing makes a incredible impact. The plot was really dark and painful; in a twisted way that's disgusting from Joey's prospective. Kaiiba's warped personality is so deranged I wouldn't put it past him to find the experience of taking Joey ~addicting~.

Ah, well, I have read few fics that can compare with these two-oneshots. Very expertly written. You are a incredible writer.

~crossmyheartforever

I really enjoyed this story.

I miss the dark Death T Kaiba. Heh heh I feel like someone finally brought a bit of him back, so thank you.

Take care.

T_T
GOD DAMN YOU KAIBA! Rape time was not as pleasing. OMFG to see it from Jou's perspective. Ugh. Sympathy feelings! T_T
I hate Kaiba now!

Talented author you are! I enjoyed the fic even if I hate Kaiba for what he did T_T I hope Katsuya will get better eventually. Or get revenge. Yes. In my mind, he gets revenge! Mwahah!

GP

And I thought the first one was down right creepy. My neck stared prickling after Kaiba said, "I'm sorry." Damn it I'm going to have nightmares! Oh well, you did warn me. You are a very talented writer. There's just no telling what's going to happen in your fics.

Wow. Dark, intense and beautifully written.

*Faves*

hmm.. usually I don't read so dark fics but man I have to admit! This was beautifully written! You portrayed the characters very well! Congradulations on that!
keep up the good work^^