NO! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

...I have no words to tell you how much I like this story!! One thing I try to do is not to read any thing incomplete,but my computer wasn't working so I didn't see that this story was still in progress.T_T T_T Do you know how much it hurt to read the last part(Which was amazing by the way) and then you try to go to the next chapter and you know what?!?!?!It's not there (Breaking into uncontrollable sobs)...(sniff-sniff)So after my loud and long speech(That I hope touches you and makes you post) please put up the next chapter quickly(:

I know story alerts and favorites drive me wild when there's no review attatched, so here it is:

I really, really love this.

I really like this story

oh i luv the story pls pls pls update & contact me
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Beautiful chapter with an ACK ending - WELL DONE!

I recently stumbled across your story and am absolutely hooked, your plot is fantastic and really sparks (and holds, which is a feat in itself) a reader's interest. I can't wait for the next update (although I appreciate that you have other things to do so take your time). I have so many theories about the 'final death' - well three theories really.

Firstly I noticed in your AN that you mentioned the English Anime, in which case Gene was never mentioned so I'm not entirely sure whether or not you would include him in the tale? If however you have then it could be Gene's death that Mai dreamt, would make sense as Naru appears to be (for lack of a better word because its very early in the morning here) solid, which doesn't promote the view of him as a ghost.

However anything is possible in a fanauthored story and it could be quite possible that Naru in some way, shape, or form effectively died along with the others...whether in spirit rather than body I'm not sure. The last theory, which is probably a stab in the dark and a really uneducated guess is that the death was of Mai's father, although that seems very unpredictable as Mai surely would have been summounded to the Manor over three years ago when the deaths occurred...so it really doesn't seem possible for it to have been her father?

Anyway I apologise for my babbling, you probably don't want to hear my (uninformed and most likely incorrect) theories. However I would like to say that I am really enjoying your story and that it's so refreshing to come across a fanauthor that can write so wonderfully well, the images that your story inspire when you read certain scenes is something that you should be proud of...Very well done.

Right I'll leave it as that as I really am going on and on now :), I'll just say that I can't wait to read more and wish you...

HAPPY WRITING!

i'm guessing its going to be her father...wonderful story by the way...id say completely original! 10/10

WHOA. Been gone from the comp for a week and something awesome like this appears. SUCH AN AWESOME INTENSE CHAPPIE I LOVE IT. NYAA~ You needa update again soon~ It's Gene, right? Right?

omg... i really, REALLY like this story! it's awesome. wish you could update them faster though.
Good Luck on writing the next chapter. i know it's gonna be greatt.
btw. the other death, was it Gene?

Wow... one of my favorite chapters! Your hard work really shows! Also, I completely understand what you said in the disclaimer, it would be great if Vic Mignogna was in Ghost Hunt.

touching. please update soon. eager to read more.

O.O I wanna know whta happens next pretty please update soon! its too good to have stopped here! update please

Yay, another chapter. This is definitely one of my favorite stories, keep up the great work!

Best.Chapter.EVER.
Ohgod, just all the NaruXMai made all the waiting worth it. Please update as soon as you can and I'll just keep on reviewing 'cause your fic is great and deserves it!