Hmm, not sure what to make of this. I loved the opening, very detailed and secretive, and your writing is excellent. However I would of loved to of read more :] This sounded like an intro, so it would be cool if you could continue it :)

just thought I'd say.

I like this story! I was surprised to see how short it was, but I kind of like the shortness. It's very well written and it really describes that kind of "in the zone" feeling that you get when you're really concentrating. Good job!

-Got Scots?

PS: Daniel Faraday has got to be one of the best characters EVER invented.