Nice short! Uh, it's been a while, but what does BG stand for? Great portrayal of Squall (er, Leon...) through Cloud's eyes. My favorite line was "lions on your arms and wings on your back. Where do you think you're going to fly?" Very poetic. good job!

I-I do not know enough words to describe--no, justify--how beautiful this is. Simply put, I adore this. In a larger context:

The style of your writing makes it clear of the situation. Your characterization of them is impeccable. I fell in love with these two, together, in the way you portray them.

I especially love that it is, infact, not written in either's point-of-view. Rather, it's telling their actions, their thoughts. A-and it's oddly fitting, the way you write them and the way you wrote this.

It's beautiful. I don't even really have much of a opinion on them as a 'ship or not, but you really drive down what I love about them. It's not just the relationship--its how you write them in this relationship.

I really can't say this enough: this is beautiful, unique, and so inspiring. I love this.

[+fav]

- Pixie

amazing lil... drabble, perphaps? Its really well-written...

Very different to what i read generally. But i have to say i loved it. It reads like poetry is the only way i can think to describe it. Well what i should say is that it reads how i've always been told poetry should. You see i've actually never liked poetry much, too vague for me i suppose, i like this i can understand. But in books and films and the like there are often moments where people are reading poetry and they seem to it something like a work of art and each line is something beautiful, not because of the meaning exactly but just because exactly the right words were picked and the writing itself becomes something beautiful rather than just the meaning. Personally i never found anything like that in a poem, but this piece came really close. The beauty wasnt it what was being described, but how you described it. Each individual phase just fitted perfectly with the next and it all just kind of flowed.
gorgeous.

Wow! Nicely done :)

Never have thought I would see your pen name under the KH category~ but your first here is beautifully written and so reminiscent of FFVI. Love it!

*drools*

Gorgeously written! Everything came together so nicely...

Awesome.

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