this is great xD
i like what u did w sakura's feelings:D u could do one with sasuke too.then it would be complete:D
also,u could make a lemon xD

hey I'm getting curious on what'll happen, any plans for a sequel...-pwetty please~!-^^

i really REALLY hate how you portray sakura as the same lovesick little weak, kunoichi as she was. she's BETRAYING her village by going with sasuke. in the part where you said, she wouldnt go evne if she could because she couldnt stand to leave him, SHES BETRAYING HER VILLAGE. ur so pathetic.

This is a good story. You write well! ^_^ I hope you'll continue writing sasusaku stories! Thanks a bunch, God bless! ^_^

Are you sure this is s onceshot?? I love it! I hope it isn't a oneshot. ITs a great story so far. Please continue with more chapters from this story. PRETTY PLEASE. ;D

My, my. If I think of my first Naruto fic, there's a big hole overwritten with the thick, glaring letters 'OOC'.
In your oneshot, those letters vanish completely.
Well, I have paraphrased a lot. Short and crip: awesome!

SasuSaku rocks!

this oneshot is really great!
love it :D

Oh! I read BlueGreenApples's Color Theory! It was AH-MAZING! This fanfic out of a fanfic was Ah-stonishingly Awesome!lol I crack myself up...(sweatdrop) Anyway! Hope to hear more stories from you because believe me I will be reading all your SasuSakus!:P

WOW!!

I really, really, really liked this story! I normally don't like reading "angsty" fics with sasuke in them, cos they're kinda all the same. But this one soo wasn't, it was one of the rare ones that I really liked!! I thought that you made sasuke to be really in-character and I think that he would also probably/most definitely act like that (cold and arrogant) towards sakura, if they ever were in that situation in the manga. I also liked the way you made sakura out to be stubborn and didnt make her cave into sasuke's demands (even though she still has feelings for him), like she would of if she was still that 12 year old lovesick girl. This shows to me that she has grown up and not stayed the same, which makes it all the more believable.

yeah sorry for the super long review.. but hey I read your profile and you did say you wanted people's opinions if it was occ or not.. eheh.. I actually am one of those people that just reads a story, then adds to favourites and doesn't review... but i decided to review since you make a good point and i thought your story was really really good!

WOW! That was amazing! Seriously amazing! I don't think I can put it into words, but I'll try. I liked how they were in character - Sasuke showed no feeling and Sakura was still emotional, but tougher. I really liked how you ended it too - it was powerful. Amazing work on your part - keep writing!

This is an exceptionally well-written fanfic of another fanfic. For your first Naruto fic,you were able to bring the defining characters of Sakura and Sasuke.

Keep upthe good work.

))LOVE it...looking forward to your next fics)

That...was flipping cool! Omg, if it was me, I'd be terrified but be acting all "GO TO HELL!" O.O
I tend to at the EXACT opposite of how I feel...it's very troublesome...lol!

You're such an amazing writer and THAT, my fellow sasusaku lover, is what makes you more than just "normal". :D

Can't wait to read more oneshots!

lots of love always,

Asami357

I love reading your fics, its really good , so keep up the good work. BTW, I only read SasuSaku Fics... hehehe... Write more about them. Thankss.

wow
i really liked this
except the ending
it shoulda bee longer