Excellent story!

"Playthings" wasn't one of my favorite episode but you made it even better with this awesome new version!

I must not read my friends page very closely cause I missed this on there. I'm sorry I haven't responded to your comment on LJ yet but I've been completely boggled with school and work. I'm extremely forgetful lately too.

Anyways! This was awesome and I'm so happy to finally be reading it cause I remember you mentioning you had an idea for something like this. Characters are so well written and it's so easy to see it actually happening in the show. You did an amazing job, again... but you always do anyways lol. I have a lot written for that one story I was telling about the 5 thing John taught his boy type story. I'm thinking I'm going to put it as a chapter story but post it all at once. Each section is pretty long. I have 3 out of 6 sections done so we'll see when I can get to the rest lol. Talk to you soon I hope! (How are things with you? Looking up any? I hope so!)

Wonderful story! :) Keep writing, please! :)