 horizontal stripes43 2008-06-26 . chapter 1Hey, I'm Ash, who reviewed "Kick Me" before.
This story was pretty good, I kinda wish you didn't recap so much, but that is an opinion and my short attention span.
Good job! The way it was written was good! |
 Phoenix Fanatic 2008-03-29 . chapter 1Yay for disney!
Awesome, of course. :D The last line was sweet.
Good description, in character- 10/10! |
 The Brainless One 2008-03-29 . chapter 1Jeez. We'd probably dead if we lived one day in Iggy's life yet he's AFRAID of going to school? That is just weird. |
 Potterfan99 2008-03-29 . chapter 1Nice point of view from Iggy. i wonder what that expirament was that made him blind? |
 mergirl007 2008-03-29 . chapter 1The first bit is old material for most of us old fans, so it was a bit boring having to read through it (even though Iggy's quips were amusing at times). But the last part was rather enjoyable; however, you've mixed up semicolons and commas, so you may want to check it over for grammatical mistakes. But other than that, you have only one typo, which is pretty good. :)
I like how Iggy says "I’ve never been so scared in my life." It's a great way to end this oneshot. And the listing of Iggy's feelings sounds realistic and probable.
-)Mer(- |
 anonymouse13 2008-03-28 . chapter 1Yay for Diz posting something! So I'm assuming this is just the little introduction... So it was a bit repetitive, as I've actually read the books and all. (No! Really?) But I forgive you, since it is only the first little bit... Continue! OR ELSE! |