i loved it.

There's nothing wrong with spelling behaviour with a 'u' *grins*. I enjoyed your story, and I am curious as to what Jack will get up to next. Until then, good luck with your projects, and I hope your muses will be around to inspire you when you need them.

Aww, that was such a cute ending! Will got the girl. :)
Thanks for a lovely story!

I look forward to the sequel...

Only one?

Aww man!

OK...

Can't wait!

can't wait for the next update!

That is a very interesting take on the story, and I'm glad you portrayed Norrington as the gentleman that he is. I'm still confused about why Bootstrap sent Will the medallion though. Looking forward to Tuesday!

Aww, only one chapter to go. :(
But you've done a lovely job with the story and invented your own pirate world. Bravo!

And so the wanderers return triumphant. I thought it was a nice chapter. The bit with Will and Bill in Tortuga was nice, and I loved it when Elizabeth took charge about the clothes situation.

Yay! I'm really happy with the way you wrote this chapter. I don't think I could have forgiven Jack and Bill if they'd forced Will to stay.
I look forward to your next update!

Hmm...the powder magazine went off...do I smell a bit o' trouble brewing for the Black Pearl?
Excellent chapter!

I really like this story! You have all the characters down pretty well. Bill and Will (oh dear) have a very realistic relationship, as far as Will's anger is concerned.

Jack Sparrow acts a little odd! I guess he's being nice (for SOME reason we shall find out), but I rather like it. :D

I can't wait to read more!

~Verity

So Will has decided he doesn't want to be a pirate after all. Why does something tell me that he's going to have reason to change his mind soon?

I think that Will might be coming to the realization that being a pirate has it's own rewards. I mean, if I were him I would be seriously considering going for it, especially since Lizzie doesn't seem like she would mind too much.

Love this chapter...I could picture everything very clearly...very well done...update soon...I