That was really good...great, great job! :D

Angelica

oh very cute. heeh. interesting perspective. lol.

I was totally digging this, excited about where it was going to lead, and I really felt letdown by the simple ending. This had the potential to be really awesome, and I felt...unsatisfied. Maybe I wouldn't have been as disappointed if the rest of it hadn't been so good. I would love to reread this if you ever feel like going more into depth with it. If not, I thought 99.9% of it was extremely good.

It's interesting; I enjoyed it. I could definetly see an episode that's similar to this. Overall I thought it was good.

Cute, i liked it alot, great job!

it was good.

i found it funny that he fell EVERYWHERE!

who.