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| foster 2008-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse1) clear up that loose end with suna, something had to happen there 2) get an external hard drive or something so even if you lose your flashdrive (which I am calling ** on btw) you still have a backup 3) keep up the good writing |
| GraityTheWizard 2008-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseINteresting start I wonder when Hinata will appear and what positive effect she will have on the story. |
| Aaron Leach 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story update soon. |
| arkard 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abusewow sweet, i may not be one to enjoy war but so far its great, seriously, never mind the flash drive, get working form memory and get this baby rolling, i love it. and whats more i cant wait for the trouble he'll get in because of his ears and tail, one of two things are likely to happen, either he's seen as a fiend or as a half ronso, leaving many people to wonder about wether thats even possibly, lol, but even then hes to... not blue to be ronso, so nthis will certainly make thongs interesting. even more so when you ** in things like sphere grids and blitz ball. im seriously loving this. update soon K ciao n.n |
| Trinity the Kitsune Kunoich... 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abusegreat story. keep writing. Sad, but good. What about Gaara & his siblings? If they're alive then they should become Yuna's guardians. All 4/5 of them (If Baki is alive him too, if not then just Gaara, Temari, Naruto, & Kankuro) Naruto's harem should have Kyuubi, Temari, Rikku, & Yuna. |
| bladeofvengence 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseyou have to write another chapter and update soon this is a good story |
| bandgsecurtiyaw 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat start please update soon. |
| FFXFan13 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI have only one problam with this fic. I Detest Hinata. And because you added her to you're harem you're chances of winning take a steep decline, not enough to knock you out of the running entierly but ennough to put you in last place.(But then again there's only 2 month's left and 40k words to achive). But i like the story Emo or not it's quite good. |
| Lucifer's Son 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting story please keep updating. |
| jp 2008-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abusegood story hope you update soon |
| BlazeStryker 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was very well handled, in my view. I hope it is followed up on eventually. |
| DAORKZ-IG Basilisk 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusegood start! keep it up! ...OR ELSE!1! >:( |
| animekingmike 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseBut its good emo-stuff. Keep it up. |
| Kazua 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abusecan't blame him for his emo moment, hell i'd probably have one to. anyway this is a great start and cant wait for the rest. |
| Anime-Freak317 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseInteresting twist of the tale of the hidden leaf village. The final chapter to their story. It was written well enough that it piqued my interest. Lookin' forward to your next chapter |