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| Lillythemarshmellowqueen 2008-07-23 ch 1,  | abuse*sniggers loudly* Ah! That was Brilliant!! Lilly |
| With A Smile 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseHilarious. I love it when Ed gets jealous :D It's about time he realized what a catch he has. Lovelovelove Ed x Win, you made it funny and charming and lovable all at once. One for the favorites, for sure. - WAS |
| crimson-obsidian-rose 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh god Ed, can't you see that Winry is madly in love with you? Apparently not, so I think she's doing the right thing by hanging around these other men; maybe it'll fix his brain (or destroy it, either way's fine) Awesome work!! crimson-obsidian-rose |
| Funereal 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseCuteth! |
| OrpheumZero 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abusePretty funny. I'll admit it does seem quite out of character, but nothing too distracting. I would say that if you had wanted to make it be EdxWinry at the end, you could have included a scene where Winry is on a 'date' with Roy and she reveals to him how she only acts like she's gaga over other guys just to irk Ed. |
| Lines 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseOh, jeez. I was laughing out loud by the end of the first part. You've got all the characters down perfectly as well. On another note, this is the fourth one of your works I've read in the last hour or so, and I must say, I'm very impressed. You're really, really good. |
| sakura22222 2008-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHa Ha! Too Funny! I love the last line! “Full Metal, there had better be a good reason why you're attacking me." Classic Roy so calm! |
| Devatron2000 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI can't wait to see more. |
| 123PIKACHU 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuselol poor ed |
| misto-shadow 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseGAH. ^-^ That was adorable. So much LOVE. XD >^.^< *Mistoffelees_Shadow* |
| Miss Woodford 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI can't explain why I like this. It's like a bad acid trip, but with a superior sort of laugh track. Maybe because it is late and I should really get to bed instead of sitting here in this cold basement, reading fanfiction. |
| S J Smith 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseLOVES, loves loves loves loves. *cackles in delight* Poor Ed. *cackles more* |
| triggerhappy.antagonist 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseGenius work. I loved. Nice touch of RussellxWinry and RoyxWinry with some EdxWinry. |
| Defining Aerith 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuse-rollsthrash- Yes! Love. Srsly, Russel reminds me of Tamaki for some reason, why, I haven't a clue. Anyways, I loved this like crazy. 'Is it because I'm short?' Aw, Ed. So cute, loved the humor and all the funny little psycho moments where Winry just egged him on because she's EVIL. -dancedance- You inserted Roi-Roi in this too, which totally makes me happy any time of the day. -glomps him- I love that man..-sigh- Anyway, adorable and hilarious, as always, and I am in lurve. [favityfavefavefave--] ♥ Aer |
| meme 2008-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abusehahahahaha that's really funny! |