 enderverse 2009-02-02 . chapter 9Didn't mind the "It was all just a dream..." as much as I usually do, but I still wish she had in some way gotten spaceship repair knowledge.
Like the accent thing though look up "Foreign accent syndrome" on Wikipedia. |
 Lia3 2008-08-10 . chapter 8Sorry about the last review. It was a little harsh sounding. I just was really getting into your story when it ended. Maybe you could do another story - Part II, a sequal, that will continue the story? |
 Lia3 2008-08-10 . chapter 9Yeah, you got me...wanting more! I love crossovers and she could have been the double from an alternate dimension. The other Earth could have progressed faster and the gould could still be snakes in a pond. The ending disappointed me. This fic could have been awesome. |
 DarKazeura 2008-05-14 . chapter 9Good story, very well written, but I gotta say, I really didn't care for the ending, it felt like you just got bored with your story and ended it as quickly as you could, there was a lot of potential that you just sort of... ignored. |
 Tory 2008-04-29 . chapter 9 >< that was incredibly cruel
yet masterfully amazingly crafter at the same time!
^_^
lol! i'm literally dying! |
 renisanz 2008-04-25 . chapter 9I'm a little disappointed by the abrupt end as well. Ya kinda pulled a "Grapes of Wrath" on me there.
Still, I really like the slow build of the story. I really thought you were going to develop the story more with the space anaomoly transporting the crew of Serenity. However, I do like the end in that it plays on the idea that sometimes a dream is "just a dream."
And, let me not forget to mention how much I *heart* the moment between Ronon and Jennifer throughout this story. I like how their relationship slowly evolved. I also like how you filled in the space where we didn't see Jen on the show. |
 Jas-TheMaddTexan 2008-04-24 . chapter 9Aw man, It was just a dream? Grr-ness. You totally had me going there. So not fair. Love it. |
 Harm Marie 2008-04-24 . chapter 9I loved your twist!! |
 JennMel 2008-04-24 . chapter 9I really enjoyed this story, although I have to admit I was a bit disappointed by the abrupt and cliche nature of the ending. Nevertheless, good writing style and movement of plot, hope to see more from you soon! |
 bailey1ak 2008-04-24 . chapter 8I loved this chapter!! I can not wait to see the interaction of the two crews. John asking Ronon to make sure he wore the really big sword was cool too! |
 Rasmany 2008-04-24 . chapter 8Hope she puts on some proper clothes first! ^^
I'm really enjoying this!
Ras xx |
 atlfan 2008-04-23 . chapter 8 Just found your story and love the way you've written it...the dream sequences were great and I really like the way you are weaving the crossover. The R/R/J triangle is quite nice too..your dialogue amongst the characters is really, really good.
looking forward to more! thanks! |
 Laby Anne Boleyn 2008-04-23 . chapter 8awesome chapter! |
 bailey1ak 2008-04-21 . chapter 7So, I found your story today and love it so far. I like Jennifer/Ronon pairing and the crossover with Firefly is really fun. can't wait to see what is coming. |
 sarcasmqueen66 2008-04-06 . chapter 7i like this the idea is so original! write more soon! |