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enderverse
2009-02-02 . chapter 9
Didn't mind the "It was all just a dream..." as much as I usually do, but I still wish she had in some way gotten spaceship repair knowledge.

Like the accent thing though look up "Foreign accent syndrome" on Wikipedia.
Lia3
2008-08-10 . chapter 8
Sorry about the last review. It was a little harsh sounding. I just was really getting into your story when it ended. Maybe you could do another story - Part II, a sequal, that will continue the story?
Lia3
2008-08-10 . chapter 9
Yeah, you got me...wanting more! I love crossovers and she could have been the double from an alternate dimension. The other Earth could have progressed faster and the gould could still be snakes in a pond. The ending disappointed me. This fic could have been awesome.
DarKazeura
2008-05-14 . chapter 9
Good story, very well written, but I gotta say, I really didn't care for the ending, it felt like you just got bored with your story and ended it as quickly as you could, there was a lot of potential that you just sort of... ignored.
Tory
2008-04-29 . chapter 9
>< that was incredibly cruel
yet masterfully amazingly crafter at the same time!
^_^
lol! i'm literally dying!
renisanz
2008-04-25 . chapter 9
I'm a little disappointed by the abrupt end as well. Ya kinda pulled a "Grapes of Wrath" on me there.

Still, I really like the slow build of the story. I really thought you were going to develop the story more with the space anaomoly transporting the crew of Serenity. However, I do like the end in that it plays on the idea that sometimes a dream is "just a dream."

And, let me not forget to mention how much I *heart* the moment between Ronon and Jennifer throughout this story. I like how their relationship slowly evolved. I also like how you filled in the space where we didn't see Jen on the show.
Jas-TheMaddTexan
2008-04-24 . chapter 9
Aw man, It was just a dream? Grr-ness. You totally had me going there. So not fair. Love it.
Harm Marie
2008-04-24 . chapter 9
I loved your twist!!
JennMel
2008-04-24 . chapter 9
I really enjoyed this story, although I have to admit I was a bit disappointed by the abrupt and cliche nature of the ending. Nevertheless, good writing style and movement of plot, hope to see more from you soon!
bailey1ak
2008-04-24 . chapter 8
I loved this chapter!! I can not wait to see the interaction of the two crews. John asking Ronon to make sure he wore the really big sword was cool too!
Rasmany
2008-04-24 . chapter 8
Hope she puts on some proper clothes first! ^^

I'm really enjoying this!

Ras xx
atlfan
2008-04-23 . chapter 8
Just found your story and love the way you've written it...the dream sequences were great and I really like the way you are weaving the crossover. The R/R/J triangle is quite nice too..your dialogue amongst the characters is really, really good.

looking forward to more! thanks!
Laby Anne Boleyn
2008-04-23 . chapter 8
awesome chapter!
bailey1ak
2008-04-21 . chapter 7
So, I found your story today and love it so far. I like Jennifer/Ronon pairing and the crossover with Firefly is really fun. can't wait to see what is coming.
sarcasmqueen66
2008-04-06 . chapter 7
i like this the idea is so original! write more soon!
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