That was really good. REALLY good. I liked it.
I just have one thing to say. Knowing how soft Ed is, I don't think he would've killed the doctors. He would've broken down and not done it. But it makes a good story, so I'm not complaining. ^_^

Except for overuse of italics, not bad. Rapped up a little quick in my opinion, but definitely was worth the read.

Cool. Even if it was a serious fic, the town drunk bit got me to laugh once.

Very, very much enjoyed this. There is a lot left unspoken between them both and it works well, considering who they are.

Heheh, you are very, very welcome! I noticed you added that extra scene when Ed woke up; a very nice addition, if I do say so myself hahah!

But seriously, you are such a talented author. Even without me beta-ing it, your one-shots are already some of the best works on FFN.

~Blazn (soon to be Green Tea)

wow, that was crazy awesome! i seriously love this fic, everything about it is just brilliant!