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| THe Fuzz 2008-07-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi this story is really great. I love your idea for the AU on the SM universe. I hope you keep writing this. I would love to see what other ideas you can come up with! |
| SKY UNICORN 2008-07-06 ch 4,  | abuseWow awesome story!! can't wait to see what happens next!! |
| linny 2008-06-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseI have one thing to say… GIMME MORE! |
| sleepy26 2008-06-18 ch 4, | abuseSo I totally read this chapter the same day that it was posted and forgot to write a review; better late than never! How nice will everyone treat Usagi when they find out who her father is? Vegeta will probably try to kill her before she has a chance to attack them! |
| mystic soilder 2008-06-04 ch 4, | abusePlease, preety please...I NEED more! PLease update soon. |
| LunarStar Princess Krystal 2008-06-04 ch 4, | abuseWow that was a great chapter. I really like how you have Serenity become friends with Goku he's a good hearted man. I can't wait to read about Serenity meeting the next generation of saiyans and find out how they take to her. How about next time when Vegeta is getting angry and wants to try to fight Serenity Goku and Bulma stand up for Serenity. Maybe later when Serenity is allowed to meet the rest of the group she can meet the cat master Korrin and Serenity starts to think of Luna, before maybe they become good friends. Well I can't wait to read what you come up with next. Please Update Soon ^V^ |
| Silver Moon Goddess1 2008-06-04 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter I really do enjoy reading this *silver moon goddess |
| SailorVengeance19 2008-06-04 ch 4, | abuseI have been waiting for this chapter, it was awsome. I hope i don't have to wait so long for next one. |
| MoonBunny777 2008-06-03 ch 4, | abuseAnother wonderful chapter! I read the story you suggested it was one of the best :) I really love your story it is done very well and you are doing an amazing job of keeping everyone in character. I cant wait to see the next chapter so update soon! |
| princess moon shadow 2008-06-03 ch 4, | abuseIt did! This was a really interesting chapter! |
| IxoxoheartoxoxNuka 2008-06-03 ch 3, | abuseGAH! No! Bad time to end the chapter! Bad timing! Please update soon I was just getting hooked to it |
| ladyredvelvet 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseYour fanfic is amazingly wonderful! The cross over to me is brilliant, the story is stunning. I want to keep reading, please keep updating! I cannot wait to see what happens next. |
| MoonBunny777 2008-05-22 ch 3, | abuseAw man i wanted to read more! Please update soon! It just started getting good! Great job! |
| MoonBunny777 2008-05-22 ch 2, | abuseWow! Another great chapter! After this story i might have to look at your other ones great job! |
| MoonBunny777 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseWhat a beautiful chapter! That was truly one of the most wonderful things i have ever read i am looking forward to the rest of your story |