Reviews for Two Inches From the Heart

Reviews For: Two Inches From the Heart

TangerineVampire 2008-07-12 ch 1,	abuseThat was brilliant. It was really unique how you had Vernon actually do most of the comforting. It's a shame this doesn't have more reviews, because it is very well-written and a joy to read. (: Keep writing!
badboys 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseI think you did a pretty good job in portraying the characters - mainly bender of course, as he was the protagonist (you really hit his bigmouth!) - I just can't help the feeling that in relation to what you let him go through he stays disproportionally cool and tough. or, the other way round - you might have let him go through a bit less (like for example only the shot) to still let his toughness come across believeable. I mean, being left by somebody you love or at least depend on emotionally, being shot by somebody you at least want to be loved by and watching the same person blow his brains in front of your very eyes is enough to totally bowl a grown man over so a teenager - even a John Bender - should at least show severe sighns of traumatic shock or something - which of course can manifest itself in kind of a non-reaction - but quite likely not in the composed and reflected state of mind your character is in. reading through a number of stories in here I got the impression that many people tend to overdramatize and I don't know if I might not walk right into this trap as well if I'd only pick up courage to write something myself, so don't take my critique amiss. apart from that I quite liked your story and I hope you give it another go. especially as people who properly portray good ol' Bender are way too rare ;-)
ForgottenStars 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseI agree, John is hard to write. I think you did an amazing job with the interaction between Dick and John. I mean, after seeing what they did and being shot they're going to be a bit OOC, but for the most part I think you've stayed true. I hope you do write another Breakfast CLub fic. ^-^ ForgottenStars
Fantasy Starlette 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseSimply amazing. I mean you really nailed the characters PERFECTLY! The Breakfast Club, in general, is just amazing, but wow you really wrote this wonderfully! Great One-Shot if I do say so myself! AH! But I was so anxious to read Bender's mom's note. I thought it might of had something more personal between them, but I liked it better with him tearing it up! lol! And VERNON!? WOW! I just loved the way you portrayed all of them! It was all just so real! I hope this isn't the end of these! Definitely faving! Your so descriptive! If you ever publish one day, I'll definitely buy it! LOL!

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