It's a really great story!!

excellent! Very well written, I love the way you managed to combine the various denominations. Thanks for writing it!

I found this story to be excellent. It is very well written. I know some people who would call it preachy but those are people who never want to hear anything along these lines. I suppose that it makes them uncomfortable with the choices they have made. I love the dogma quote and the Amdir/Estel analogy is beautiful. I look forward to more from you. P.S. - I hope that you get many favorable reviews. I wrote a faith based story, once upon a time, and it was well recieved. I only got one negative review. My story was nowhere near as involved as this one, though. Keep up the great work.