U could have made a better ending
Anyways Iiked it even if I kept losing myself
Soo glad I finished it ^-^
Good job n I hope to read more of ur stories

This has become my new favorite story of all time. You write so incredibly well...and despite the fact that you describe fantastical and completely out-of-this-world scenarios, everything seems so...real. The emotions and how problems and relationships don't work out just like that are wonderful. Narusasunaru is my OTP of all time, and so I love it when they're together and perfect, but a lot of writers make it...too perfect, almost, and you definitely avoided that.

I totally got lost in reading this, and enjoyed every bit of it.

Loved it, and thanks so much for sharing.

Hey nice fic. lol i can SO imagine Sakura just staring at the sheet of paper and turning paler every second. i liked most of this story except for the fox bit where i found it kinda weird but other than that Great job! btw my account is actually neonghost1996 lol so feel free to reply

I never, ever review stories, though I have read fanfics for about 3 1/2 years now. Usually, I do not like Sasuke, but your story has given me a new liking of his stubborn character, ( and him as the 'submissive'. This is one of the most out-there,unique, Naruto fics I've ever had the pleasure to read.

Now I'm done being super serial.
WERD, LoserFaceWow.

This is... bizarre. I mean, it's very well written! And it'd be absurd to say it isn't engaging. But... I guess it isn't my kind of story. Sorry. My brain just... hurts. Like my train of thought keeps crashing and piling up six cars on the rail.

wa~ Right now I'm a big jumble of love for this story and I can't really think of much! I loved it, absolutely loved it, and if I'd stayed up only an hour later last night, I wouldn't have had to wait until I woke up to read it!!

*lovelovelove*

Its spelt child not childe. Good story though :)

wow... just wow. i can't even find words to describe how amazing the fic is. everything about it is amazing. plot-wise and all. and i absolutely loved the philosophy about fate. haha. it had been a refreshing read. :)

okay, i'm not supposed to be reading a fic right now but i'm totally hooked. i look stupid grinning like an idiot the whole time i'm reading it. haha. XD

wow...that was just...words can't describe how awesome that was...i loved it! this has to be one of the best stories i've read. great job!!

Here was my reaction to this chapter: O. M. F. G O_O

I think my brain just melted... O_O *goes into shock at TOTALLY unexpected revelation*

This is story can be described by myself as truly EPIC I loved every moment of it and while I found it (very little of it) to be long I enjoyed every moment of it so much I have read this stroy twice and is undoubtedly the moest thought out and well written story I have read in a long time. The best story in the NaruSasu or SasuNaru catagory and I would just like to say (asm613) that everything you wrote in your reviews was completly annoying why did you have to review so much with what I found to be really negative comments about how unreal and unlikely it seamed um HELLO ITS ANIME AND THIS IS FANFICTION twit. And who cares if you get a few features wrong so Gaara has green eyes boo hoo get over it!
An amaxing piece of fanfiction I should have reveiwed the first time round which it was still active WELL DONE!

i love it, and...the ending was great!

?I think you should add "angst" to your story summary/description. It had more angst than it did romance or humor

you have a supposedly wise old man ask a person out for lunch the day after he got out of the hospital with no eyes. He then asks these TWELVE year olds what they're going to do as careers with their lives. Am I the only one who thinks this is the most unlikely and stupidest thing to happen?